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My favourite animal is tortoise. Tortoise walk not fast. But I like the tortoise. Why? Because, tortoise is a cute animal. It have a short tail and a four short foot. It have a little head and a hard shell. They are forty-five little and cute tortoise in My home.
They like to play in the water. When they afraid some thing. They wall run fast. They like to eat the fish. I often buy some small fish to them to eat. They can catch the fish fast. First, they fake(假) sleep.
When the fish swim near they mouth. They catch the fish fast and bit the fish head. So, the fish die. They can eat the fish. In winter. They like to sleep in the sand. When they sleep, they don’t eat any food . Because they wall hibernation. But, when they are thirsty. They come out of the sand. So, we must give water to them to drink.
I love the tortoise. I hate the eagle. Because, the eagle often eat the tortoise with it sharp mouth.My favourite animal is tortoise.
参考译文：
我最喜欢的动物是乌龟。乌龟走路快。但我喜欢乌龟。为什么?因为乌龟是一种可爱的动物。它有短尾巴和四个短脚。它有一个小脑袋和一个坚硬外壳。他们是45小和可爱的乌龟在我的家。
他们喜欢在水里玩。当他们害怕一些事情。他们墙跑得快。他们喜欢吃鱼。我经常买一些小鱼给他们吃。他们可以很快的抓到鱼。首先,他们假睡眠。
当鱼游在他们的嘴。他们很快的抓到鱼,鱼的头。所以,鱼类死亡。他们可以吃鱼。在冬天。他们喜欢睡在沙滩上。他们睡觉的时候,不要吃任何食物。因为他们冬眠。但是,当他们渴了。他们出来的沙子。所以,我们必须把水给他们喝。
我喜欢乌龟。我讨厌鹰。因为,鹰经常吃乌龟用它锋利的嘴。我最喜欢的动物是乌龟。