when I was a child, i was fascinated by the melody of piano on the screen. at that time, I dreamed of being a pianist and having my own piano.
At the age of five, my father bought me a beautiful piano as my birthday present with the money they had saved for a long time. at the same time, my father found a piano teacher for me and every day I would practise it again and again as my father demanded. before long, my interest in piano was transferred to other things.
I began to escape the practice as much as I could. my father found out my impatience. he encouraged me and was stricter with me than ever before. with his help, I underwent the hardest time and devoted myself to the piano.
Now, in my spare time after a long time of study and hard work, I always play the piano and enjoy the beautiful music.
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当我还是个孩子，我被吸引住了在屏幕上钢琴的优美旋律。当时，我就梦想成为一名钢琴家，有自己的钢琴。
在5岁的时候，父亲给我买了我的生日与他们有很长一段时间积蓄的优美钢琴。与此同时，我的父亲找到了我，每一天我会实践，一次又一次，因为我爸爸的要求钢琴老师。没过多久，我对钢琴的兴趣转移到其他事情。
我开始逃避尽可能多的做法，因为我可以。爸爸发现了我的急躁情绪。他鼓励我并与我比以往任何时候更严格。在他的帮助下，我度过了最困难的时候，全身心投入到钢琴。
现在，在我以后的学习和努力工作很长一段时间的业余时间，我总是弹钢琴，欣赏美妙的音乐。